Reviewing Essays

    Mr. Rease printed out a few essays for the class to look over. Each essay has mistakes and errors that the class should find and fix together. The first essay, in my opinion, was the worst I have ever read. The introduction had no thesis and the claims in the body paragraphs was not backed up by evidence. I learned a lot reviewing these essays and the thing that some of these essays had in common was repetition. The same thing being stated over and over again which is quite irritating. If I were to write an essay now, I know I would do very well on it.

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